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BSHS Year 5 · Optional persuasive writing

One New School Space

Your school has funding to create one new space: a shaded outdoor learning area OR a larger indoor library and study area. Write a persuasive piece explaining which option the school should choose. Make your position clear and develop your reasons fully.

Write a complete piece, rather than a list or plan. Time limit: 30 minutes. This is independent practice, not a statement of the official exam’s writing mode.

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